Alexander England

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My peer review was less than critical of my paper. I didn't get much feedback to work with for my paper. I believe peer review is less than effective due to the tendency for people to assume that criticism will be met with offence. In reality this just makes the peer review system a compliment barrage with no real suggestions for improvement. There are no time constraints as this is a self paced class making revision and rewriting easy. My plan is to correct grammar mistakes and make minor adjustments to the story where I think there needs adjustments. I am looking forward to completing this assignment, I have certainly learned a lot and am confident that I will do well.